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Re: Pursuit
A train of bikers moved slowly along a deserted path. They continued doggedly on even though their limbs were exhausted and they were all panting half-heartedly. All of them have ...
Sep 17, 2007 -
Re: Tears
Erm, wow. That was interesting. I can't critique it much because it was just so bizarre. But I think I liked it. It was a bit gross, but at least ...
Sep 17, 2007 -
Re: Sestina
Ooh. I've not heard of this kind of poem before, which makes it difficult to critique, since I don't have past experience with them to compare it to. I will ...
Sep 17, 2007 -
Re: Vagabond Cabaret
I loved the pace of this piece, I think the flow is great. A few things I'm unsure about: don't keep me waiting - hit the action action Did you ...
Sep 17, 2007 -
Re: Fade Away
I liked this. I would have liked it more if they had been good friends at the end, with no hard feelings and everyone lived happily ever after, but that's ...
Sep 17, 2007 -
Re: Still stuck
There are loads of sites which list poetry magazines you could get published in, I can't remember any off-hand but I'm sure there are some listed in the resources section. ...
Sep 17, 2007 -
Re: 1952 Chevy
I really can't critique art, but I really like how you created texture, and also the perspective on this piece. Nice job, hopefully someone else will come along with some ...
Sep 17, 2007 -
Re: Physics is...
Your face! Your face! ... Physics is your FACE! *runs out of the room*
Sep 17, 2007 -
Re: Matt's Little Writing Corner
Hello! This is my first time posting in this part of the forum, because I've had a veeery long period of barely writing anything. Now, I have an idea I ...
Sep 16, 2007 -
Re: Just a bit of randomnocity!
Blackpool beach or Clearwater beach? :P
Sep 16, 2007 -
Re: My Dad, His Guitar, and Me
This is very sweet. Just as sweet as your avatar, in fact :) Yeah, that's all I have to say :P *scuttles off*
Sep 16, 2007 -
Re: Hello, Little One.
Aww :) Of course we want pictures! Show us the cuteness!
Sep 14, 2007 -
Re: Depp?
Matt to the rescue! *swoops* Moved to randomness.
Sep 13, 2007 -
Re: Who's The Best YWS Character?
I was torn between Fred and Pat, but Fred gets my vote.
Sep 13, 2007 -
Re: freedom rewritten
The hills sparkled with the lift rain that drizzled down. She stood in the center of it all, He hair was the wind, whisking around her childlike face. She began ...
Sep 13, 2007
